Knowledges and necessaries!!

Hello ladies and gentlemens!

Tonight, I'm very glad to talk about some things with you. Long time no see, I'm feeling to miss you so much! I had heard a little information from Ms.Ngan about 30/4's day.Perhaps, I have to send to you a topic. Did you know...?
Nowadays, Travelling is becoming one of the most popular forms of entertainment.
Most people travelling and relaxing after hard working days.Travelling, we can see several beauty spots of our country and overseas. we can meet many different people of every nation to learn from them and share joys and sorrows in our life.Travelling, we can close with the nature, we can change the habit about eating and drinking every day. We absolutely free! We don't have to worry much about money and work at all.We can breath the fresh air.We can our knowledge by knowing the cultures, customs and traditions of some placer. Finally, I hope our class will attend really enough to let's can listen to heart beat from A06 class.
Thanks a lot for your reading!
FOR GET ME NOT @:@
Let's listen to heart beat from A06 class.It's mean: cùng lắng nghe nhịp đập con tim từ A06 thân thương đó mừ..! khì khì...Thanks for your opinion!

general commend:
Your writing skills are very good. but u had some mistakes.
line 3, information has no "s".
line 8, our life changes to our lives. many people=> many lives
line 9, everyday is a adjective, u must use "every day", it is adverb.
line 10, we can... (losing verb),
line 11, let our => let us
from Finally to heart beat from a06, i cant understand.

then van dau len giai dap cho then ly coi

lớp mềnh bữa nay ghê bây, dở ra là English không

Thèn múp này đc nàk, làm t đọc mà loạn cả lên

tao chả bít cái đách gì hết

mí đứa phải coi kĩ và phản biện lại người sửa có đúng k chứ, đừng có tin nó sửa, đúng hk?
lớp A06 thấy người ta dùng grade a06.